I hope you don't mind if my first comment is criticism. Though I can add that I followed your comic because it is interesting, while I'm at it!
But I'll go ahead with a comment on the drawings anyway: I don't know what are your goals for the art, but if you're looking to improve it I recommend starting with the mouths, the open mouths looking like red holes are kinda disturbing to see.
But I'll go ahead with a comment on the drawings anyway: I don't know what are your goals for the art, but if you're looking to improve it I recommend starting with the mouths, the open mouths looking like red holes are kinda disturbing to see.