Comic 17 - Floods

16th Jan 2018, 10:20 AM
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Dodom 21st Jan 2018, 7:43 PM edit delete reply
I hope you don't mind if my first comment is criticism. Though I can add that I followed your comic because it is interesting, while I'm at it!
But I'll go ahead with a comment on the drawings anyway: I don't know what are your goals for the art, but if you're looking to improve it I recommend starting with the mouths, the open mouths looking like red holes are kinda disturbing to see.